On-going Personal Project_Sample Scene_Friday_by Marie Cantor
- Marie Cantor
- Mar 29, 2021
- 5 min read
Friday
Persons in scene
SAM - father, separated from Jay. Has full custody over Claire, 47-years-old.
JAY - Former absent mother; 35-years-old.
CLAIRE - Sam and Jay’s daughter, 13-years-old.
A knock at the front door. SAM is in the KITCHEN, but then moves to open the door.
SAM opens the door. JAY is standing at the door.
SAM
Hey.
JAY
Hi.
SAM
You’re early.
JAY
Only by five minutes--I skipped lunch. Is there something wrong? Is someone here--
SAM
No, no...just surprised--
JAY
Why? You think I can’t be on time like a normal person or?
SAM
No--I’m just saying--
JAY
I know what you’re saying--
SAM
Come on now, I was just trying to make conversation--
JAY
I don’t think so--you’re not a small-talk kind of guy, I think you were trying to make me look like someone I’m not--
SAM
Jay, you know you never had the best track record, now please can we leave it?
JAY
Fine, whatever--
SAM
Great--
JAY
Are you going to let me in?
SAM
Yeah, no of course--come in. She’s still up in her room packing her things. You can sit at the table in the kitchen--
SAM gestures JAY inside and they walk to the KITCHEN
JAY
Why isn’t she ready? Did you tell her when I was coming?
SAM
Well--
JAY
Don’t--
SAM
You asked
JAY
Don’t start--
SAM
Ok--anyway, I forgot to tell you--
JAY
JAY sees a plate of homemade cookies on the kitchen counter
Can I have one?
SAM
Go ahead--
JAY sits down at the kitchen table, SAM stays standing with arms crossed.
JAY
Oh god, these are terrible--did you make these? Jesus, Sam.
SAM
I didn’t--you don’t have to eat them--I’m trying to let you know though--
JAY
Seriously, whoever made them really need a refresher on how to make a cookie. These are dry as hell.
JAY takes out phone to look at it, finishes the cookie.
SAM
Jay--forget the cookie, can you listen to me?
JAY
I’ve been listening! I can chew and listen at the same time, now come out with it--
SAM
Claire has a project due next Monday, so you’ll have to bring her here on Friday instead of Sunday. I want her to have the whole weekend to work on it.
JAY
JAY puts phone down, positions self to be fully facing SAM
What? That’s honestly not necessary. This is my week, Sam. You promised--what’s her project on anyway? I can help her.
SAM
It’s better if she does it here. I’m already caught up on all her schoolwork--it would just be easier.
JAY
This is stupid, she can do it at my place--this is my week. What class is it for?
SAM
You’re making this harder than it has to be. Just bring her back Friday ok?
JAY
Increasingly more irritated
Well, you’re the one taking away two days that I could be spending with my daughter. You promised me a full week this time--this isn’t fair--
SAM
What do you want me to do Jay? I have full control here, ok? And I think it’s best if she’s home where she is most comfortable, so she can do well on this project--that’s it--
JAY
Oh, so you’re saying she can’t be comfortable with me? Ok--I see
SAM
That’s not what I meant--
JAY
I think that’s exactly what you meant--She is very comfortable with me, ok? Very comfortable.
SAM
I’m sure she is.
SAM sits across from JAY at table
JAY
What’s with your attitude? You don’t believe me? Ask her herself--she’ll tell you. We have a lot of fun together.
SAM
I get it, ok--
Looks away from JAY
JAY
We go shopping, we go to the park, she plays with Champ--who she really loves, you know she told me that you won’t get her a dog--and you know what I think that’s super weird and just goes to show I do some right too, yeah?
JAY becomes more aggressive with body language as SAM continues to be avoidant.
SAM
I get it, Jay, ok? I’m sorry--I know she likes spending time with you.
JAY
Damn right--she’s MY daughter too. I’m the one that spent nine hours in labor, she’s MINE.
SAM
I understand Jay--but I’m telling you to bring her back on Friday--Friday night? How ‘bout that?
JAY
Bring her back? What is she a borrowed toy?
SAM
Jay...please…
JAY
You promised me a week. I’m getting my week. I deserve my week, Sam.
SAM
I don’t want to get into this right now.
JAY
Get into what?
SAM
Nevermind.
JAY
No, please. Tell me. Indulge me. My ears are open.
SAM accepts the challenge and turns back to JAY and is more aggressive,
SAM and JAY gradually raise their voice
SAM
Fine, you want to know what I’m thinking?
JAY
Try me--
SAM
Not sure why you feel so entitled to this full week when there were years where you refused my phone calls, refused my invitations--
JAY
Well, I’m answering now--
SAM
Fucking hell, Jay, I even searched for you on the fucking street to pick up your ass for our daughter’s fifth birthday--and you know what you said to me?
JAY
Fuck off, Sam--those were different times--
SAM
You know what you said? You know what you said to me when I found you?
JAY
Whatever--I’ll drop her off on Friday, ok? Happy?
SAM
No, no, now I’m starting to worry that you have some sort of memory loss--tell me--what did you say to me, Jay?
JAY
I don’t remember--
SAM
Right---maybe I can help because I can’t stop it from repeating in my head all the fucking time when you’re around--
JAY
Sam--
SAM
You said--
JAY
Please--stop, please--
SAM
You said...you said…
SAM lowers voice in a whisper
”that kid could be dead on the side of the road and I wouldn’t even look twice”
JAY
That was a different time--I’ve changed. I’ve shown you so many times--
SAM
So many years could go by and that is something I will never forget. Never.
JAY
Fucking hell, Sam--I could barely remember my name back then. I’m stable now. You have no idea how I feel about how I used to be.
SAM
No, I understand you’re probably ashamed, regretful, whatever--but that doesn’t mean I have to forget everything you did in the past.
JAY
I’m not asking you to--
SAM
Then what are you asking me to do? Hm?
JAY
Well, I was asking for a full week--
SAM
No.
JAY
Yeah, I figured. So, are you done? Can I go help my daughter pack?
SAM
You stay here--I’ll help her pack.
JAY
Are you serious? Come on--
SAM
Stay here--have another cookie, I don’t know--I’m going to help her--
JAY
Whatever--
SAM
Friday, no later than 9pm, k?
JAY
Yeah, yeah--
SAM
I’m serious--
JAY
I get it--
SAM exits
JAY takes and eats another cookie. She stands up from her chair and begins walking around the kitchen. Picks up pictures on the fridge to look at them and makes reaction expressions. The picture frames are with SAM and CLAIRE with his current girlfriend. JAY then takes another cookie to put in her pocket and then moves to the front door to wait for her daughter.
SAM reenters the scene with CLAIRE.
CLAIRE is wearing a backpack and has one suitcase
JAY opens up for a hug and CLAIRE hugs her very briefly, then returns to SAM’s side
JAY
Hey baby, so excited to spend more time with you this time! I have so much fun things planned--
CLAIRE
Well...I have a lot of homework..so…
JAY
Yeah--you’re dad told me, but we can still have a little fun, yeah?
CLAIRE
Yeah, I guess…
CLAIRE looks up to SAM
SAM
You’ll be back on Friday, you can work on your school stuff during the weekend, it’s ok--
JAY
Yeah, and the weather is going to be so nice and sunny--I found a cute little beach near my new apartment, we can take Champ--Does that sound fun?
CLAIRE
Yeah. I didn’t pack a bathing suit--
JAY
Oh um,--
CLAIRE
I didn’t know--
JAY
No, no you’re fine. It’s fine, we can just walk around and maybe look for seashells? That sounds nice, hm?
CLAIRE
Yeah--um…
CLAIRE again looks up at her father.
SAM
I’ll see you at the end of the week, yeah?
SAM hugs CLAIRE very tightly. Their hug lasts longer and JAY notices.
Have a great time, I love you--
SAM kisses CLAIRE on top of her head
CLAIRE Love you--
JAY
Here’s my keys, babe--you can put your stuff in there while I talk to your dad, sounds good?
JAY hands CLAIRE keys
CLAIRE
Yeah--bye dad.
SAM
Bye, hun. Love you--see you on Friday--be good--
CLAIRE exits
JAY
You owe me a weekend--
SAM
We’ll see. She has a busy schedule.
JAY
You promised--
SAM
We’ll talk--
JAY
Right…
SAM
This is just how it has to be for a while.
JAY
Yeah...I’ll see you on Friday.
SAM
Be careful.
JAY
You too...because whoever made those cookies is trying to kill you...
SAM
I’ll see you on Friday--
{Short pause}
JAY
I love our daughter, Sam. Seriously. I’ve made a lot of mistakes, but I’m trying to make up for it.
SAM
I’ll see you on Friday
JAY
Ok. See ya’
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